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Author Topic: Tragic Kingdom (July entry)  (Read 1163 times)
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« on: July 03, 03 03:55:30 PM »

The lascivious smile of a cat
in the dark, dark, dark.
A malicious touch
that ceaselessly strips you
to the yearning core.

Bring out the beast.

No more of the Sunday morning rules.
Have this pretty piece of flesh.
Leave bite marks
and balance me on the tips of your claws.

End it on this.
Rising tides of emotion
begin to burn like we're riding the sun.
666 drops of sweat.
Fire and ice meld together
to make pure light.



pretty piece of flesh-One Inch Punch (romeo and juliet soundtrack)
sunday morning-no doubt
end it on this-no doubt
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« Reply #1 on: July 04, 03 01:10:20 AM »

*phew*  great poem dove !  For someone who didn't much like the criteria you have done a wonderful job, well done, good luck !
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« Reply #2 on: July 04, 03 04:14:55 AM »

Yep dove gotta agree with Freya...excellent write!  Good Luck!

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« Reply #3 on: July 04, 03 03:16:29 PM »

Great poem here, dove.
You blended those song titles in quite nicely.
Smoothly done.

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